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    Senior Hostboard Member Malcore's Avatar
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    Took a bit longer than I expected, and ended a bit shorter than I anticipated but I'm otherwise rather happy with the end result. I had initially started on a different match in the Amateur Night even thingie but my laptop had a HD failure and I was too disheartened to resume work from scratch and did this one instead. C'est la vie. Next up is either the next in Amateur Night (4 of 5 or 6, depending on my mood) or a unrelated match featuring Lora and/or her equally slutty, more or less equally inept sister/lover Cassie. Not sure yet. Anyway, as always constructive criticisms and input on the match are welcome - as are suggestions/requests for future matches (not that I guarantee fulfillment! [img]biggrin.gif[/img] ) and I hope you enjoy it.

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    The clean-up crew (and accompanying robots) quickly and efficiently cleaned up the mess of fluids and human-debris that were once Lora and Cassie and the ring and surrounding area were, as before, clean as new and ready to be used. The third match of the night was pitting the newcomer and Hooters (Some establishments really withstood the test of time!) waitress Crystal against the FFF's Puerto-Rican spitfireChristina.

    Crystal was first in the ring wearing her Hooter's girl outfit (and no underwear, of course, her DD's straining the tanktop to it's limits) and posing for and flirting with the crowd as she waited for her foe to arrive. Christina arrived next to whistles and catcalls as she and her own pair of (slightly larger) double-dees bounced down the aisle, clad only in a very low-cut silver skin-tight swimsuit of sorts.

    The bell rang and the fight was on! Crystal and Christina circled each other cautiously, breasts bouncing with each step, neither just quite ready yet to make the first move. Crystal eventually broke the silence first with a hard fist that buried itself in Christina's unprepared stomach, causing the Hispanic heart-throb to bend slightly at the waist while clutching herself. Crystal, wasting no time and trying to dominate early, quickly followed up with an uppercut that drove fast and hard into the underside of Christina's right tit causing Christina to yelp and also causing the shapely orb to leap out of it's confines eliciting a secondary yelp of embarrassment from Christina and a round of approving roars and jeering laughter from the crowd. Invigorated, Crystal gave no time to Christina to recover and immediately followed up that last tit-punch with 2 rapid shots to the exposed melon drawing screams from Christina and a third punch to the stomach, again. A fourth punch was about to bury itself in Christina's gut when Christina recovered and quickly gave Crystal a hard punch to the face that sent her stumbling backwards and gave Christina the time she needed to catch her breath, recompose herself, and also put her tit back into her outfit.

    A running attempt from Crystal to clothesline Christina to floor met with failure and humiliation as Christina managed to duck under it just in time and, rising up behind Crystal, quickly locked one arm around Crystal's neck and used the other to grab hold of and squeeze one of Crystal's (still clothed) breasts. Crystal immediately gasped in a mixture of surprise and humiliation and then instinctively locked one hand onto either wrist of Christina, trying to pry her arm away from her throat and her hand away from her precious rack, all while gasping and moaning in a mixture of pain, pleasure, and humiliation.

    The crowd was loving it as the seconds became minutes as Christina mercilessly squeezed the life out of Crystal's left tit and choked her out. After several grueling minutes of this torture Crystal finally, in one of those ?holy shit did I just do that?? moments managed to literally bend forward at the waist with such speed and force that she managed to lift and toss Christina up and over her back and hard onto the floor before her, where she lay moaning in pain/shock and writhing a bit. Crystal, unfortunately, could not capitalize on her foe's condition much as she was preoccupied with trying to massage the pain out of her aching and now swollen and slightly-discolored breast.

    While Crystal, in her inexperience, may have been momentarily preoccupied by her aching tit Christina was not. She got up off her (shapely) ass and, grabbing her by the shoulders, drove a knee up between Crystal's legs and slammed it right into her womanhood with a snarl of ?Bitch!? Crystal's eyes immediately shot to the size of dinnerplates as her mouth took the shape of a sensual ?O? in a silent scream of agony. Her hands shot away from her aching tit and to her aching cunt as the crowd laughed and mocked the slut's pain. Christina simply laughed and gave Crystal a quick slap to the face that, coupled with her aching tit and grin, dropped her to the floor.

    Grabbing Crystal by the hair and getting down on one knee Christina lifted Crystal slightly and drapped her over her knee and then, to nearly deafening roars of approval from the crowd, pulled off Crystal's shorts and top (leaving her nude save her shoes and hose) and began to spank the poor waitress, each hard smack causing her shapely ass to jiggleto and fro like jello while Crystal shrieked and cried out in a mix of pain, arousal, and humiliation. Five minutes and one thoroughly reddened ass later Christina grew bored of the torture and pushed Crystal off her knee and onto her back, standing and facing the crowds herself and leaving her foe to moan and whimper on her back while pathetically trying to cover up her tits and crotch with her hands.

    ?Who's horny!?? Christina shouted to the audience drawing an immediate and loud reaction. ?Good, cuz you're in for a treat tonight!? Without wasting a minute the Hispanic hellcat grabbed Crystal by the hair once more and dragged her by out of the ring and to the audience. Finding a random male member (pun unintended) in one of the front rows Christina dragged Crystal over to him, instructed him to take off his pants, and shoved Crystal's face in front of his fully erect member, holding her by the hair. ?Now look, slut, you're going to give this nice man who came to watch me obliterate you a really good blow job and maybe, just maybe, I 'll make the rest of the match quick on you.? Crystal, tears in her eyes and whimpering in shame, simply shook her head no. A hard elbow to her back forced her to open her mouth and Christina quickly shoved her onto the erect cock. Forced into compliance Crystal did the best she could, expertly sucking dick in hopes of making her humiliating end quicker. Despite her relative compliance Christina did not let go of her hair and forced her up and down, occasionally causing the hooters girl to gag.

    Crystal lost track of time as everything turned into a blur of sights and sounds, mostly a dick going up and down and people laughing and cheering. Finally her lucky partner came and, forced to swallow, her torment seemed over. Christina was far from done, though, and flung Crystal back into the ring violently where the effectively nude and completely humiliated babe lay on her back crying and whimpering. Christina opted this time for a bit of a flashy finish and once again grabbed Crystal by the hair and stood her up.

    Crystal stood on wobbly knees, drooling and blissfully unaware of the world around her aware only of a sharp pain coming from, well, everywhere. She was, then, unaware as Christina walked behind and grabbed her head and pulled forward (back for Crystal) hard and fast eliciting a quiet gasp from Crystal and a loud snap from her neck. Christina let the lifeless body fall to the floor as she left the ring and made her way out of the arena to catcalls and cheers, while the arena crew, ever dutiful, tended to the mess.

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    Nice.... long wait, but that can't be helped sometimes. (as I know all too well) God work, and I like the ending to, good job.

    MikeJV

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    Thanks, glad you liked it! For those interested who may/may not care enough to voice an opinion which may/may not have a direct effect on my ultimate decision the next stories I'm considering are, in no particular order:

    Lora vs Aiko

    Lora vs Cassie

    Cassie and/or Lora vs vs a male

    EDIT: Oops that last one should be Cassie and/or Lora

    <font color="#a62a2a" size="1">[ July 22, 2008 10:45 PM: Message edited by: Malcore ]</font>

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